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Feedback from David Rau
The page has improved since the last round of feedback. You have not added an original image yet. You need to create an original image for the page. I'm not entirely sure what to suggest you could make. Maybe you could create something similar to the gif and make a diagram showing how shield domes form and remove the gif from your page. I feel like the section describing the location is unnecessary, and that information could be moved into the description section since it is so brief. Some more work could be put into making the page easier for people who might not be knowledgeable about geoscience or planetary topics to read. Some examples of things that could be linked or explained in the page better are hypsogram and Guineverian Period. In addition to those changes in the intro you mention that Mikhail A. Ivanov and James W. Head identified the formation so maybe it would be beneficial to explain who they are.
Comments from Kohl
I think the page has good structure but needs a little more text. The formations section could use more detail on the significance of theses structures and what they tell us about venus tectonics. The gif also displays much detail but an original figure would certainly help. Lastly, I think the opening paragraph could use a bit more depth. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kkoppe2 (talk • contribs) 15:25, 8 April 2014 (UTC)
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